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* FOAMBALLS! EPISODES 29, 30

Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2005 8:30 am
by Squidink
removed for reworking. sorry for the inconvenience.
squid

Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2005 6:46 pm
by _cant_touch_this
Thank you Squid, bloody great series. I'll be reading it again as a whole in the not too distant future I'm sure.

Posted: Sun Feb 27, 2005 12:11 pm
by marcus
hey squid, why did you stop?
was it just the right time to end it?
jeez im going to miss this.

Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2005 2:04 pm
by Larry
Strong stuff from the beginnning to the end squid and the dialogue dead true all the way along

Thanks for the entertainment mate ~ and thanks for letting me break baldric's jaw in the final scenes

but I'll never love the gentleman !!

larry

Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2005 2:06 pm
by marcus
Squid wrote:but do ya reckon there's a sequel in it?

would ya buy it in paperback? see the movie? :shock:
as the magpies say ...fark yeah

this automatic editting thing just changed my magpiefark to shoot

Posted: Tue Mar 01, 2005 10:27 am
by Spoon
That's a worry Squid. It must have a bit too much detail for the young'uns. "Don't worry Mum, I ain't looking at porn I'm on Realsurf, really!"

Posted: Tue Mar 01, 2005 4:36 pm
by oldman
Well done Squid,

I've just skimmed a few sections. You can spell, and write. I'm impressed. I had assumed that foamballs was a bit of a comic book quality read and expected some juvenile titillation and probably lots of abuse. You've actually conjured a story.

I might even read this meandering tale. No time for now but well done anyway.

I suspect all these forum types write for the joy of expression and the hope that others will read. You've just taken it to the next level.

Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2005 11:55 am
by Squidink
oldman wrote: You can spell, and write. I'm impressed.
:evil:

Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2005 1:48 pm
by oldman
Sorry Squid,

Wasn't meant to offend. I assumed foamballs would be like captain goodvibes type cartooons (was he the dude in tracks magazine all those years ago). More like Dostoevsky than Captain goodvibes.

Re the spelling. It ain't easy typing a lot of words without a spelling error. Requires some concentration and focus and commitment if you are going to put 90,000 words together and clean them up.

Now, what does this dude mean (':evil:')

Now I know. The javascipt tells me 'evil or very mad'. You shouldn't be Squid. I'll find some time on the weekend to catch up on some of your past episodes. Promise.